Pandora-Tranquil's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[API - Elixir]

pretty cool

it does sound good, props i suppose for making the bass like that, but i hate how easy it is to make dnb with that break, everyone jus uses loops nowadays, what happened to making it from scratch?
(im talkin bout the drums, not the bass)

apimusic responds:

The suprising thing is that those drums WERE made from scratch =P. (although i did layer the amen over the drums).

[Psybot - Second Level]

nice 1

awesome, not much i can say cuz im lazy right now, but i love the tweaks and the power to the lead synth.

love the speed too

respect,

Pandora

Psybot responds:

thx man.

But i just reallised that the quality on the sounds are terrible... i used headfones when i finished this.. and i will never use them again.

when i litsen on it now, some sounds kind of screamed to get out of the speakers. =P

im gonna try fix it and put it up ASAP.

Until then.. thx for your review mate.

//Psybotronicle Waste\\

[¨jStormy Night¨j]

Good base to the song

Nice arping, and a very good base to the song, however it just feels like a base, it needs more FX, and noises to carry the song, more reverb on the main synth, and maybe some delay if you dont plan to have more than one synth going for a dual-lead.

nice mainstream melody, not too mainstream tho which is a very good thing.

respect,

Pandora

MattBlair responds:

Thanks for the review Pandora, unfortunately this song is finished, so we won't be able to publicly change it. I also agree its not too mainstream, which is a good thing.

Respect to you,

DJ bLiX

[B0UNC3 - Distorted Reality]

grr

heard it all before bro, stop usin that synth! grr!

i like the intro one tho, sounds nice.

nice melody, maybe change the velocity when it skips tho (speed hits)

B0UNC3 responds:

Thats not vanguard bro ;).N ye maybe

[Psybot - Techno Stage 1]

feelin the emotion

i love the first synth, but the pad or whatever that thing is with it is a lil annoying, id replace it with something a little more filtered, less solid, a little more wet.

other then that one synth, everything else fits real nice, and all the melodys are great, but that synth is jus too loud an annoying for me (don mean to be harsh lol, an the melody is GREAT an so is the production, jus change that one synth)

this is very moving, the production keeps it dancey and moving, and keeps you interested.

its not too mainstream, but there is no definate climax, i suggest lengthing it to 4 minutes, and making a climax around 3 minutes or so (jus my 2 cents) and replace that synth lol

great job tho, good emotion

Psybot responds:

thx for your review man.. its not often i get critic about my songs.. and with this i hope to make things better. yes i know the songs might be short.. but if i lengthen them up there is a chance they might feel like its repeating itself.. im kinda bad at making it diverse. but hey! ill just have to make a song.. litsen to it in a week or so.. and hopefully i have come up with something more to add or remove or something...
But it would be nice to have somebody to review the "demo" then. and without putting them on NG i dunno what to do. maybe my friends.. but none of them does compose ne music of there own... so i dunno.. neway... time to stop writing.

thx again for your review ^^

//Psybotronicle Waste\\

[NDP-Imagination]

haha didnt see that coming

the second i heard that piano\70's synth thing i saw a 70's techno coming, but i guess not.

this is pretty good, nice progression, and it seems like for a noob ur learning pretty fast.

so keep learning, id suggest teaching urself everything, that gets the best results.

on another note, i definately see you are basing your music, or at least this song, on every other techno out there, DONT LOSE YOUR ORIGIONALTY, because thats what people like. The production in this is VERY mainstream, and although good, its been heard before, many, many times, so mix it up, make up your own techniques.

respect,

pandora

NDP responds:

thx mna pandora, its good to here comments from ppl... i hate when ppl just vote :P:P well your VERY right, i will concentratre more on itnroducing piano/trance to my songs because thats where i come from

Peace

Nicolas...

[Gentle Rage]

origional for sure

idk if i like the static on the drums, but i like the pads and the feel of the drums on them, it fits.

they are very tranquil pads, the drums are great, they fit perfectly, i jus don like the static at all lol.

great feeling, when the static dropped it is like, undescribable, this is a category all of its own, an its really tranquil, i love slow stuff like this.

jus take the static away an itd be really cool

LJCoffee responds:

heh.. thanks! - originally I didn't have any distortion on the drums - but I decided to push it a little to see what would happen... Thanks for the review - some more ambient stuff is on the way - you may like those a little better.. =)

[*DarkMoon Rave* [ZeRo BaSs]]

good

if u use fruityloops we gotta collab sometime, mainly i jus wanna learn sum techniques from u lol.

newayz cya later

ZeRo-BaSs responds:

damn man...mainly i use reason...btw i have made a sample 'n stuff pack i can share it with you if you are interested....
Thx

*ZB*

[«I AM WRONG» .: Dj Spada:.]

What are u doing on NG

Stereotypical trance, very atmospheric, with skills like that you could really go somewhere with your music.

This is too mainstream, try an steer off from that and into something more origional.

The main melody is good, but its a little too loud for the atmospheric background.

id be interested in talking to u
my aim is PandoraTranquil my yahoo is SiSiMeN313
and my msn is [e-mail]

ttyl,

Pandora

DjSpada responds:

Hey Pandora_Tranquil! Im hoping to make it further than NG and really publish something professional. Im looking forward to talking to you also. ttyl!

BYE!