Pandora-Tranquil's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Profound Sacrifice]

better

the drums were really basic but the piano really livened it up, and the padding was pretty nice.

for somone new you are pretty good, but everyone needs practice.

Crazy-Train responds:

thanks for the great review. this one (compared to the others ive done and posted) is one I am proud of. yeh I know I need some practice. but soon Ill get some good stuff.

[BrainDance]

well your new so

fruityloops fx.... lol

it sounds ambiant if anything.
and way too experimental for me.

its allright, experiment with synths more instead of jus FX\ samples

Crazy-Train responds:

yeh I know im going to work on synths soonish once I get used to this. Thanks for the good review.

[Frivolity]

awesome bass

idk about the bass it was AWESOME on my headphones but idk if it is clipping or not.

it sounds GREAT with that uber powerful bass, and a cool drumline.

however its pretty repetitive up untill u introduce that other synth.

i don care for it that much tho, but its cool that u changed that loud noise from the beginning halfway through to more of an air noise.

its pretty good, but it loses my interest when the new synth kicks in.

PaNdOrA

Fuel2Fire responds:

Yea I focused too much on slight changes in the drums... theres a few diff drumlines in there but its not different enough to keep it from sounding dumb... I shoulda focused on more melodys and synths. And some of the synths are a bit odd like that weird air one... I think your refering to the same one I am talking about.

Anyways it was something I thought of doing for a change... a bit more fun and fast than my usual

[Pure Science (No Phaser)]

good

the beginning isnt very good but when the bass kicks in it gets pretty cool.

sounds kinda like a boss fight or something in metal gear solid (when it was on the NES)

i hate old sounds like that, but when it becomes the bass and that noise its pretty cool sounding.

pretty industrial\dark
and a really cool arrangement of drums and stuff.

its origional, but not as good as LA

PaNdOrA

Fuel2Fire responds:

Yea the opening sound is a bit repititive and such... I'm getting lazy in my songs but I've been being encouraged by my GF to keep trying and I'm starting to work with the settings a lot more before I start a new project...

Thanks for the review.

[L-A (Double Fantasy Mix)]

great!

i wouldnt call this trance.

the beginning is pwnage dude! it is a really origional sounding DNB (idk i think you shouldhave went more DNB with it) but u used some cool padding.

those pads went well with that wisteling noise.
and the bass was really cool

really cool drums and it is really origional (although a tiny bit repetitive)

i like this dude too bad ur hardly noticed

PaNdOrA

Fuel2Fire responds:

Thanks... its pretty simple but I went a bit different in how I arrange my songs for this one... I think it came out a lil more random than my normal stuff and a good change for me.

Thanks for the review

[chilly<( " )> the second part]

Pwnag3

wow dude i totally 100% expected u to be a noob (but i wanted to return the favor for listening to my music)

this is totally 100% pwnage dude.

the guitar adds a cool hybrid feel to it

when i heard that plucked in the bg halfway through it was awesome dude! u really capture some emotion when u have everything cut and leave the reverb, you really did awesome.

for real dude you should be proud of it, if you are new to music you will blow me away very very soon.

i gotta make something like this soon so that ill get better haha

keep using those same music making tactics in other songs (not wild about the hybrid of guitar and rave, but dude u had pwnage synths and a really awesome technique to it.

well dude good job, im not gonna critisize it (like i usually do) cuz im busy right now.

peace
PaNdOrA.................Tranquility at its finest

[Convoy v2.0]

good job!

the drumline was a lil hard but it got better.

let me say this, you are an AWESOME chord artist, but this jus doesnt sound like trance, it sounds like it should be in socom or something during the intro movie (really dude its real good)

keep making music like this it is great and very powerful. maybe ill check out some of ur other work, but this isnt trance (all i make is trance so im pretty sure lol)

oh and u should really respond to ur reviews, especially if a reviewer checks back to see if u said anything, i always like to know what u think of what i said and if it helped or anything.

powerful chords good drums (although a lil tiny bit loud) and a good melody.

9 and 5 to protect u from zero voters
PaNdOrA

Khuskan responds:

SOCOM eh? Why does everyone keep relating my music to games i've never played :D I guess thats a good thing, that i can psycicaly steal sombodys style without even listining to it AND get away with it too. I couldnt really think of putting it anything else but trance, which is a decision i made purely on my distorted drums, which felt very trancy to me. I'm getting pretty lucky with my music at the moment, some of them have been used in some quite high rated flash, some of which were on front page so i'm blaming this sudden wave of popularity on that. I'll keep doing what i'm doing, becuase that seems to be what people want :D

[Cool Thingy]

yay!

HAHAHA uve made 173 songs and im the first to review the first one submitted lol!!!

this is actually ok since it was so long ago, pretty nice fast strings, it would be cool to take that and use what u know now to make it awesome.

i voted five LOL

pwned

PaNdOrA

DJRunaway responds:

Omfg, LOL! Hahaha, thanks man :) First song, first review... hehe :) Thanks =)

Roflmaopwned,
DJ Runaway

[Not Again - Laidback Lawnmower]

nice quality

i don really care for funk but u did good. cool use of FX.

that echoing plucked noise was really trippy, sounds like something out of a trance.

i like the real weak hats u got in the background they fit. once the pads kick in its awesome again, like a spacey funk, or a new age funk haha.

i liked how u had pads then u changed them to a different more high pitched one, but u leave it feeling mystic by making it sound far off.

i left a bunch of random reviews so check out ur other songs.

good job on this one
PaNdOrA

[DJ Runaway - Too Lost Again]

complex and cool

sweet intro drums that was cool.

pretty nice basic bassline. good use of vocals, and cool drum effects in the background.

the foreground funk string u used with the bassline went well. they fit together well.

the chorus pwns ass when the piano kicks in.
the drums are better there, the strings are emotional and everything works well together.

nice piano again.

u used alot of cool effects with the drums.
but the chorus pwns

when you made it repeat again and tweaked the drums and the bassline that was pretty cool i liked that.

PaNdOrA

Thanks for your vote, Pandora_Tranquil! You voted 5 for DJ Runaway - Too Lost Again, raising its score from 3.78 to 3.90