Pandora-Tranquil's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Strange Horizon]

good job

sounds far away, thats the only bad thing.

its VERY basic, you can tell you are pretty new to this, but not prob dude, you got a nice beat there!
don worry bout the score you get from votes, fags like to go around voting zero on everything they hear.

you can only judge a song by its reviews.

the only thing i didnt like about this was with the mix of sounds it sounded like u went into the fine tuning knob and edited it to go up and down with the pattern lol. (which is bad)

good job tho!
(sounds like fruityloops am i right?)
if i am right get on aim or msn
Aim- SiSiMeN313
msn- [e-mail]

message me and i might be able to help u learn (if you want) good luck with ur music

PaNdOrA

[API- Acid Death]

wwwwssss

I wuz kinda dumb id admit, and i was very stupid, i deserved what i got (all my shit on SiSiMeN wiped off the portal)

but now on my new account PaNdOrA_Tranquil i make all of my shit 100% from scratch.

i dont mean to stir up anything, but you said i sucked ass and everything (most of my songs on that account were 90% from scratch) and u said u "challeneged me to make a song"

well there u go, i got about 20 for u
and as far as the reviews go, most of them are from 8 to ten overall.

good luck on your music

[-API- Liquid DnB]

pretty good

nice beat i didnt like the very beginning, but then it got pretty cool, its definately origional as far as the main synth goes, i like it.

its kinda hard to hear it once you get the ocean pad in but its still pretty cool.

you got good FX n shit, so whatever pretty good

[-API- Midnight Electricity]

good

you have some pretty good skills with the filtering and everything as far as the song goes.

i like the main synth and i can get into it pretty good.

kinda basic, but its pretty good i like, not great clarity, but the song is good itself.

pretty nice mix of sounds, and good reverb n shit.
i like this, its definately better then bitter.

apimusic responds:

I'm really suprised that you could tell that Bitter was from fruityloops, because it wasn't. Reason. This is fruityloops.

thanks for the reviews.

[-API- Bitter]

pretty good

i recognized the screechy synths from fruity, but they were very annoying.

after they shut up and the main synth kicked in it was pretty good. it sounded kinda like jus a really loud pad playing over and over though, you couldhave done better.

apimusic responds:

Thanks.

To all of the worthless faggots that voted 0 on my stuff, email me and tell me why you did so. Please. Go ahead. and "becuz ur gey" isn't a good answer.

Zeroing my stuff repetitively doesn't make you any more of a man.

[Connection (Chapter 4)]

good

no offence or anything (and dont get the wrong idea it sounds pretty good) but the reason the track is 18 mins long is prolly cuz u basically play a loop over and over and over and over and over and....etc

i despise repitition lol

it has nice FX and some nice melodys to it (especially when it finally changes)

and its kinda slow for DNB, you can barely classify it as DNB

anyways it was pretty good, but you need to work on the repitition.
PaNdOrA

Gillenium responds:

electronic music has a tendency to repeat

[Panda]

better than chocolate syrup

gotta give you credits for drums on that one, i really liked how you quickly put 2 hits together to make a weird sound on the drum.

it may not have been really fast, but it sounded alright.

you shouldhave changed up the pad a lil or added another one halfway through tho cuz it got repetitive.

i don know what that effect with the explosion thing was but i like it ALOT really really adds character to the song.

most of the sounds you added were in-audible, but they could be heard somewhat, and overall i liked the song, its pretty cool.

JPhoenix84 responds:

Sad to say, my music isn't always as original as it could be. The pad is a sample, so I didn't really have any control over the tones throughout it. I could have changed the pitch of the entire sample, but I made this a long time ago, and didn't even plan to finish the song... so...

I guess I'll get right into it (I'm bored). I wanted to make something drum & bass sounding, that sort of rhythm... for my sister. She was really into drum & bass at the time. So, originally, this song was called "Lara", before I decided to make it a little cuter after envisioning pandas in an asiatic forest.

Thanks a bunch for the review! :D

[Chocolate Syrup (Ultimix)]

good job

there was a pause between the looping of the main melody that left it kinda weird, not bad tho i like the main beat its real cool.

but when it stops and the other thing comes in its kinda weird, but when the pad kicks in its good again, once u get everything at once its really epic as you said, and i like it.

you did a pretty good job on this one.

jus so you know, as with everyone i review, you review my work i review yours.

PaNdOrA

JPhoenix84 responds:

;)

[Never Ending Glory]

well

you were right about sounding like final fantasy, work on the cutting though, it cuts the sound off so it sounds weird.

the drums fixed that.

once the piano thing kicked in it sounded cool, and most of the stuff sounded really cool, but for some reason it jus felt weird to me, i didnt like it too much.

normally i LOVE "pretty" stuff like this, but the sounds were jus kinda occwardly chosen and didnt really fit with eachother (not to mention there was too many sound changes)

[Bedn jam]

nice try

very very very very off beat, this might have been kinda good if you put it down right, but it was so off beat it was jus kinda annoying...sorry

PaNdOrA

Thebeddens responds:

Yes... I know. I was rather embarrassed, but the truth of it is, that my comp is super slow. When I record the drum track so teh flames fan and I can record guitar on top, my comp will occasionally slow down, and the result is that you will hear tiny freezes in the drum music where the comp froze for a tiny period of time. That's where the off beat feeling comes from. Get me more comp memory and I will be your best friend forever. And it will be more on beat. PLEEEEEEAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSEEEEE!