Pandora-Tranquil's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[L-A (Double Fantasy Mix)]

great!

i wouldnt call this trance.

the beginning is pwnage dude! it is a really origional sounding DNB (idk i think you shouldhave went more DNB with it) but u used some cool padding.

those pads went well with that wisteling noise.
and the bass was really cool

really cool drums and it is really origional (although a tiny bit repetitive)

i like this dude too bad ur hardly noticed

PaNdOrA

Fuel2Fire responds:

Thanks... its pretty simple but I went a bit different in how I arrange my songs for this one... I think it came out a lil more random than my normal stuff and a good change for me.

Thanks for the review

[Convoy v2.0]

good job!

the drumline was a lil hard but it got better.

let me say this, you are an AWESOME chord artist, but this jus doesnt sound like trance, it sounds like it should be in socom or something during the intro movie (really dude its real good)

keep making music like this it is great and very powerful. maybe ill check out some of ur other work, but this isnt trance (all i make is trance so im pretty sure lol)

oh and u should really respond to ur reviews, especially if a reviewer checks back to see if u said anything, i always like to know what u think of what i said and if it helped or anything.

powerful chords good drums (although a lil tiny bit loud) and a good melody.

9 and 5 to protect u from zero voters
PaNdOrA

Khuskan responds:

SOCOM eh? Why does everyone keep relating my music to games i've never played :D I guess thats a good thing, that i can psycicaly steal sombodys style without even listining to it AND get away with it too. I couldnt really think of putting it anything else but trance, which is a decision i made purely on my distorted drums, which felt very trancy to me. I'm getting pretty lucky with my music at the moment, some of them have been used in some quite high rated flash, some of which were on front page so i'm blaming this sudden wave of popularity on that. I'll keep doing what i'm doing, becuase that seems to be what people want :D

[Cool Thingy]

yay!

HAHAHA uve made 173 songs and im the first to review the first one submitted lol!!!

this is actually ok since it was so long ago, pretty nice fast strings, it would be cool to take that and use what u know now to make it awesome.

i voted five LOL

pwned

PaNdOrA

DJRunaway responds:

Omfg, LOL! Hahaha, thanks man :) First song, first review... hehe :) Thanks =)

Roflmaopwned,
DJ Runaway

[DJ Runaway - Heart Beat]

cool

ohhh cool beginning sounds dark with that whistle, and i think u were going for like a far away dark war drum feel.

you made it pretty well but the drums couldhave been more war-like.
cool tho, they sound cool and powerful.

not much else to say about this one.
PaNdOrA

DJRunaway responds:

Hehe, thanks for the review man :) This was just a quicky, made it in 10 minutes :) Thanks for the review (again)

Greetz,
DJ Runaway

[FAN - Revolut1on Rem1x]

origional

i saw the word loop below this in atomica's description.... i hope u didnt make it with loops cuz really in my opinion its not the same as making it from scratch..

in any case it starts weird and its not TOO good, but the piano is breathtaking really.

i listened to it on shit speakers and still enjoyed it.

thats a really cool mix of sounds.

not the best but the pianos are GREAT!

i enjoyed it
PaNdOrA
oh and sorry you barely get any reviews...
ill advertise for u or sumptin in my thread on the audio topic thing in the BBS

Fanta5t1c responds:

eh dont even bother, ppl hate me as it is, im just not gunna submit to this site nemore

[B0UNC3 - Infinite love]

great!

nice melody it was a great cool intro and a cool explosion with lots of reverb into those strings.

this is VERY moving, i was checking the trance list and saw that you had a few songs on the top....

so i checked it and dude it is WORTH IT.

this is VERY professional, i definately learned from it and maybe ill make something like it next.

you have some VERY good production techniques and a great use of synths, (its mainly the synths lol) and u did good drums.

i hope this is 100% urs cuz if it is you are one of my fav artists now. im gonna check out sum more if i get time.

what program do you use? i use fruityloops 5 myself.

damn good job dude you are way better then i expected.

PaNdOrA

B0UNC3 responds:

*wipes tears* ;D Thankyou for the wonderfull review.To me a sogn without a proper lead is like when you are taking a shit without toilet paper, well you get my point ;D.Im not actually proud of my drums but i do my best with them.

And once again (check my response to scorpion's review on Alive)there is and will never be any reason for me to submit something thats not 100% mine, unless i made a VS like Alive and the other producer approved of it's submition.

Would it suprise you if i say i use FL studio 5 too?;D

Your own music aint that bad ;)

[Somebody Tu-Step?]

Advice

i dont really have time to listen to the song right now, but i will later, i jus have some advice and helping words.

Dont worry about not getting reviews at first, barely anyone does when they first start, keep making it and keep practicing and you will get noticed.

i will check ur shit out.

make sure to vote 5 on ur own shit cuz ppl like to vote zero for no reason (fags) don worry about them hopefully you will get better and get noticed!

good luck!

PaNdOrA

Shael-Riley responds:

And that, ladies and gentlemen, was the last we saw of young Pandora_Tranquil.

[DJ Runaway - Dusk R]

good job

its pretty moving at the beginning, some powerfull padding and an ok kick intro, however the kick is kinda basic (cept for the filtering)

and its kinda slow for a trance at the beginning, its a real long intro.

once everything kicks in its pretty good, i mean since u say its ur first trance experiment i say u did a pretty good job (almost all i do is trance so i guess im a big critic lol) it had a nice fast feel to it, and some weird ambiant sounds but it was overall pretty good.

i heard fruityloops noises, is that what u use? jus wondering.

it moved well, but maybe work on the synths so they sound more trancey you know?

good job
PaNdOrA

DJRunaway responds:

Guess I'll have to download ALL your songs now, don't I ;) Thanks for another great constructive review mah man :)

Greetz,
Runaway

[Time (ReMiX)]

uhh

personally i really dont like remixes, they are right up there with loops in my opinion.

it was good and really pretty (although kinda annoying with the fucked up scratch shit all over the place.

actually it kinda sounded like a bunch of good trance songs playing fucked up together at different times... lol whatever idk how u did this but it sounds pretty good.

Scorpion132 responds:

yes i agree with you that it could get anoying after a while, but if you dont like remixes then dont listen to my music if you dont want to. Thx for reviewing anyways.

[Robot Factory!]

well

whoah kinda repetitive with that synth. its fast but it sounds like you are probably new (no offence)

one thing you should work on is longer melodys\patterns, and use more synths in melodys, instead of just playing.

(sounds like fruityloops) most people make stuff like this when they are new to fruityloops.

im glad to see you are making lots of songs, good luck on getting better!

masterhaichanchu responds:

thanx, yes it's fruity loops. I only know the basics at the moment. Some of the projects that people have made sound like top 10s sometimes they are ace. I just got FL 3 days ago so i not very good yet. thanx for the good review!