Pandora-Tranquil's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rucklo - Teknokrator (Loop)]

omgzors

perfect for a menu or something.

great loop, not too much goin on, not too loud.

somone should use it.

Rucklo responds:

Exactly my opinion :D Hope someone will. The full song weill probably be up shortly... I´m mastering and tweaking lik hell here :P

Thanx for the review man!

/Rucklo

[TechnoDrummer]

coolness

more timing my friend, this song has GREAT potential, its a GREAT video game track, but you cant do bass like that cuz it either clips or overpowers everything else, cuz u have to be able to hear the other synths.

awesome lil beat tho dude, if u put a master EQ on it and toned the bass WAY DOWN, it would sound great. jus make the bass loud enough so it is about to clip but doesnt (make it peak all tha way)

this has great potential, i think you should re-do it with new ideas.

btw don make it repeat that much, u have to change things up if u repeat.
great track
PaNdOrA

Gorthus responds:

Wow, thanks!

[Stone Fall]

melodic

nice melody, but theres not much to it.

but of course its a guitar.

pretty nice
PaNdOrA

Tancrisism responds:

Thanks, I was going for simple and melodic.

[Fleets (4mins 39secs)]

fucking AWESOME

dude holy shit you need to get more reviews, this is bullshit.

1 review? damn dude advertise or SOMETHING, this is AWESOME.

such a fucking awesome buildup, its fucking awesome, sounds ambient tho, u shouldhave made drums from beginning to end if u were gonna catorize it as trance. i won review lower cuz of it tho.

this is some MOVING SHIT, this is a catagory all of its own. ill get u known, no worries, if all ur shit is this good ill help u out.
PaNdOrA

AdmiralConquistador responds:

I love you :)

-ac-

[Take a Suck Assholes (56s]

had to listen to this cuz of the name

LOL funny name.

its too fat for me, i mean i know u did that on purpose but the main would sound cooler if it was a synth.

it got better and i changed my mind when the string noise came in, this is really experimental sounding, its really cool actually, itd prolly be cool in a FPS game in a robot factory or sumptin (if it was longer that is)

pretty cool and origional, ill give u a 5 since 0 voters piss u off so much (if i vote at all i always give 5)

AdmiralConquistador responds:

Hehe, I think I might finish this and put it in the Video Game section, LOL. You really know how to encourage don't you? I followed your advice and advertised, hehe. That string noise is actually a saw wave with a billion effects on it. Makes it sound like strings. hehe, should have just used strings and hurt my cpu 2% less. :D

Thanks dude, again I appreciate

-ac-

[Da queen rap]

LOL AWESOME

LOL

Dutch-Hurricane responds:

tnx

[Ripped And Torn--_--]

organicly insane

its not really that big of a deal, but the FX are too recognizeable as FL standard samples (maybe more editing) now it sounds good, maybe a lil less volume on the main FX, and jus a TAD more on the drums (not much) one thing this is really missing is good bass, maybe a sub freq bassline or a normal bassline but with 4 by 4 generic kicks.

its a really organic generic DNB, so i wont go into detail about any melodys (cuz there are none) but i would suggest toning down many of the FX (especially encounter or whatever that one is) (and the nuke one) and have them run in the background while you have some new melody in there (i suggest a really strong synth, and use fast dist on it)

maybe if u feel like making this better and tweaking message me on aim- SiSiMeN313
or msn- [e-mail]

I use fruityloops 5 if you didnt know, so i can see your project, and same for you.

anyways its good, but it really needs a melody somewhere (even though the FX are recognizable (not many plugins on them) they are good and there is a good variation in them.

the drums are really good, and really fast, they sound great, jus more bass is all you need as far as the drums go. (good variation in them too good job in changing them up alot)

PaNdOrA

PERVOK responds:

heh i see u read that review i gave u pandora. ty and i dont use msn that much so ill add u but i would be on rarely

[The Rave Scene]

perfect quality

and i thought u didnt know shit cuz u only had 2 songs in ur profile lol.

i didnt take your review too seriously of my work.

dude THIS is where i want to be, THIS is the kind of quality stuff i want to make (actually this isnt like really really good cuz the melody is so basic) but the synths sound GREAT and idk dude all the sounds are perfect, i really need to work on my synths, thats my main downfall......

anyways i wish u had more on here, u could be really good on the audio portal (not that u care cuz u already have a job u prolly get good comments all the time) but dude id love for any help from a professional.

What program u use?

if u read this review aim me at SiSiMeN313 or msn me at [e-mail]

thanks for reading. good song

RyanChampion responds:

Hey there, thanks alot for your review, every bit of feedback I get is a big help. I'll add you to msn when I get a chance.

As for the programs I use, I use FL Studio 5 as a sequencer, for the synths, and for this track in particular, I used Vanguard, V-Station, and SuperWav Pro for the synths.

Anyway, just wanted to say thanks for the review, and that I'll help out in any way I can :)

Peace

Ryan Champion (aka SGF)

[B0UNC3 - Bleeding Heart]

to my idol

sorry bout all the bullshit that has been happening to you dude

love the song, im not gonna go into detail this time, but dude you always out-do me =)

be happy, ur gonna be a rich motherfucker when u get a good record label.

an remember who was there before you were famous =P

good full out song, great tactics, great everything.

PaNdOrA

B0UNC3 responds:

Hehehe thanks :D altho you are wrong...I'm NOT famous :P

[Rucklo - BeatingUp The Weakest]

sweetness

i smiled as soon as i heard the starting drums lol.

this sounds cool, you always take fucked up synths and make them sound cool.

the bass is awesome, it flows great, and the whole thing sounds origional.

it has so many emotions i really don know what to say about it, exept this is definately one of my favs from you.

its basic, but it sounds great!
maybe i should stop trying to make complex melodys for once.....

sorry i don got an awesome review for u, i don feel like it right now, but the song was hella cool.

Your swedish bro
PaNdOrA

Rucklo responds:

A big part óf this song is the bassline, its supposed to be the big thing going on. Listen to the bassline, follow the other stuff :D

Thanx alot for the review man! :D

/Rucklo