Pandora-Tranquil's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Psybot - Techno Stage 1]

feelin the emotion

i love the first synth, but the pad or whatever that thing is with it is a lil annoying, id replace it with something a little more filtered, less solid, a little more wet.

other then that one synth, everything else fits real nice, and all the melodys are great, but that synth is jus too loud an annoying for me (don mean to be harsh lol, an the melody is GREAT an so is the production, jus change that one synth)

this is very moving, the production keeps it dancey and moving, and keeps you interested.

its not too mainstream, but there is no definate climax, i suggest lengthing it to 4 minutes, and making a climax around 3 minutes or so (jus my 2 cents) and replace that synth lol

great job tho, good emotion

Psybot responds:

thx for your review man.. its not often i get critic about my songs.. and with this i hope to make things better. yes i know the songs might be short.. but if i lengthen them up there is a chance they might feel like its repeating itself.. im kinda bad at making it diverse. but hey! ill just have to make a song.. litsen to it in a week or so.. and hopefully i have come up with something more to add or remove or something...
But it would be nice to have somebody to review the "demo" then. and without putting them on NG i dunno what to do. maybe my friends.. but none of them does compose ne music of there own... so i dunno.. neway... time to stop writing.

thx again for your review ^^

//Psybotronicle Waste\\

[NDP-Imagination]

haha didnt see that coming

the second i heard that piano\70's synth thing i saw a 70's techno coming, but i guess not.

this is pretty good, nice progression, and it seems like for a noob ur learning pretty fast.

so keep learning, id suggest teaching urself everything, that gets the best results.

on another note, i definately see you are basing your music, or at least this song, on every other techno out there, DONT LOSE YOUR ORIGIONALTY, because thats what people like. The production in this is VERY mainstream, and although good, its been heard before, many, many times, so mix it up, make up your own techniques.

respect,

pandora

NDP responds:

thx mna pandora, its good to here comments from ppl... i hate when ppl just vote :P:P well your VERY right, i will concentratre more on itnroducing piano/trance to my songs because thats where i come from

Peace

Nicolas...

[Provoked to Fucking Kill]

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idk lol i cant give my opinion on metal like this, its too hardcore for me what can i say =P

GoreBastard responds:

WHOOO HOO!!! Thanks mate, I thought you left. I hope you're back for good dude. Thanks alot for the big RAAAHHHH!!!

[Gentle Rage]

origional for sure

idk if i like the static on the drums, but i like the pads and the feel of the drums on them, it fits.

they are very tranquil pads, the drums are great, they fit perfectly, i jus don like the static at all lol.

great feeling, when the static dropped it is like, undescribable, this is a category all of its own, an its really tranquil, i love slow stuff like this.

jus take the static away an itd be really cool

LJCoffee responds:

heh.. thanks! - originally I didn't have any distortion on the drums - but I decided to push it a little to see what would happen... Thanks for the review - some more ambient stuff is on the way - you may like those a little better.. =)

[*DarkMoon Rave* [ZeRo BaSs]]

good

if u use fruityloops we gotta collab sometime, mainly i jus wanna learn sum techniques from u lol.

newayz cya later

ZeRo-BaSs responds:

damn man...mainly i use reason...btw i have made a sample 'n stuff pack i can share it with you if you are interested....
Thx

*ZB*

[«I AM WRONG» .: Dj Spada:.]

What are u doing on NG

Stereotypical trance, very atmospheric, with skills like that you could really go somewhere with your music.

This is too mainstream, try an steer off from that and into something more origional.

The main melody is good, but its a little too loud for the atmospheric background.

id be interested in talking to u
my aim is PandoraTranquil my yahoo is SiSiMeN313
and my msn is [e-mail]

ttyl,

Pandora

DjSpada responds:

Hey Pandora_Tranquil! Im hoping to make it further than NG and really publish something professional. Im looking forward to talking to you also. ttyl!

BYE!

[Burden Of Man Pt2 BETA]

building to?

argh i hate the synth, it sounds good in the air portion of it, and horrible everywhere else.

This is faster than the first, but the buildup in the first one was way better.

cant say much about it its only 42 seconds long.

PERVOK responds:

yeah, and if anyones wondering IT WAS MENT TO BE CRAPPY

[Burden Of Man--_--]

rar

Stereotypical trance music, without the load of FX.

Something needs changing to keep the interest in the beginning. Once the second melody synth kicks in it sounds much better, but its not loud enough.

Add more FX, and make the reverse kicks a lil more bassey. The breakdown at 1:50 is good, but i wouldhave suggested keeping the origional melody, or arp it to its peak instead of gradually rising.

the melody after the peak needs work, you dont want it to just rise and rise like that, and then lower and lower, theres not any variation in that.

You definately need some air FX in the beginning, and some wind and atmosphere to keep it going.

PERVOK responds:

thanx

[FAN - Endeavor]

what happened!?!?

good drum build, an good placement, but it didnt build to anything! nothing changed!

ahh thats horrible!!!

other then that it sounds good, but why did u drop the melody at 58? u shouldhave like added a second melody that kept going if u wanted to filter it back in.

the fx was good but dont drop the drums then it feels random, keep the drums, make em louder, KEEP THEM PLAYING, and keep introducing more.

this song has alot of potential, idk why u didnt make it to its fullest.

Fanta5t1c responds:

old song =P and if u listen to state of trance ITS THE SAME o.O sot is liek the remix, but its slower, this was a very old song, and i dint make teh loop =P took me 5 mins to make, so ppl could yell at me for being dumb =)

[FAN - Forever is Never :BETA2:]

good start

iight, good melodys, but too much changing, pick something and stick with it and build off it.

the 2 first melodys that u introduced and dropped were both good and had potential to base a song off them.

you cant have like melodys coming in and out, cuz then it jus feels random u know?

i like the base to the song tho (not the bass, the base)

Fanta5t1c responds:

i like vareity, plus this is a beta =P and I LOVE RANDOM!!! i love the bass more than the trancesness im just gunna make a dnb with som like 10 - 20 seconds tracks or something