Pandora-Tranquil's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Burden Of Man Pt2 BETA]

building to?

argh i hate the synth, it sounds good in the air portion of it, and horrible everywhere else.

This is faster than the first, but the buildup in the first one was way better.

cant say much about it its only 42 seconds long.

PERVOK responds:

yeah, and if anyones wondering IT WAS MENT TO BE CRAPPY

[Burden Of Man--_--]

rar

Stereotypical trance music, without the load of FX.

Something needs changing to keep the interest in the beginning. Once the second melody synth kicks in it sounds much better, but its not loud enough.

Add more FX, and make the reverse kicks a lil more bassey. The breakdown at 1:50 is good, but i wouldhave suggested keeping the origional melody, or arp it to its peak instead of gradually rising.

the melody after the peak needs work, you dont want it to just rise and rise like that, and then lower and lower, theres not any variation in that.

You definately need some air FX in the beginning, and some wind and atmosphere to keep it going.

PERVOK responds:

thanx

[FAN - Endeavor]

what happened!?!?

good drum build, an good placement, but it didnt build to anything! nothing changed!

ahh thats horrible!!!

other then that it sounds good, but why did u drop the melody at 58? u shouldhave like added a second melody that kept going if u wanted to filter it back in.

the fx was good but dont drop the drums then it feels random, keep the drums, make em louder, KEEP THEM PLAYING, and keep introducing more.

this song has alot of potential, idk why u didnt make it to its fullest.

Fanta5t1c responds:

old song =P and if u listen to state of trance ITS THE SAME o.O sot is liek the remix, but its slower, this was a very old song, and i dint make teh loop =P took me 5 mins to make, so ppl could yell at me for being dumb =)

[FAN - Forever is Never :BETA2:]

good start

iight, good melodys, but too much changing, pick something and stick with it and build off it.

the 2 first melodys that u introduced and dropped were both good and had potential to base a song off them.

you cant have like melodys coming in and out, cuz then it jus feels random u know?

i like the base to the song tho (not the bass, the base)

Fanta5t1c responds:

i like vareity, plus this is a beta =P and I LOVE RANDOM!!! i love the bass more than the trancesness im just gunna make a dnb with som like 10 - 20 seconds tracks or something

[The Never Ending Fight LO]

omfgzorz

btw i voted 5 on most of ur songs, redid ur stats a lil lol.

PERVOK responds:

my hat is off to you but....

denvish ate my hat.
so
my pancake is off to you.

[Hawks Eyes LOOP]

rawr

id suggest instead of that flanged drum thing, you keep the main melody, add one higher pitched noise, and at the end keep the melody going and have a 4 bar drum buildup (an maybe drop the gate an have the high pitched noise play instead)

crazy how my mind works.

[Faded--_--]

the clowns rage

andymark71 prolly wont see this, but HES A STUPID FUCKING FAGGOT.

dont be NICE to the fucker, what a PIECE OF SHIT, lets see YOU COME UP WITH SOMETHING BETTER YOU BITCH, you even hid behind your lil faggot alt. account, fucking pansy.

lets see you even make a song, this guy would make u cry if u ever fuckin tried to compare, your a fucking joke.

already told u what i thought of the song bro.
keep on makin music.

[Hawks LIVE Drum Solo]

nice bro!!

crazy shit bro.

work on keepin a perfect pace tho.

PERVOK responds:

hey i know the reason y i slowed down is cause i was trying to go faster than i could lol

i might do another drum solo and stick it into a song im doin....u never know....

[The Iron Drum--_--]

your better than i thought, you know

The drums are kick ass, i love the industrial style drums, the gating is good, and the melodys are dark.

Speed the tempo, switch up some synths, and this would be a VERY good dance.

the main synth that needs work is the first gated synth, its too trancey for a song like this.

you could take this somewhere, always remember, if it don sound perfect to you, change it till it does, for real i see something good from this song.

and in my opinion (from what ive seen, especially when you did work in my song) you are too good for newgrounds (but stay if u want lol)

i suggest joining garageband.com as well.

PERVOK responds:

i already joined garageband.com and u shouldn't have given me those drum samples pandora. they are too much fun, i over use them.
btw, i guess that U GOT ROBBED.
HAHAHAHAHA
i guess not cause you gave them to me out of free will...

damn now i dont feel special.

gawd i wanted to rob some1.....

[Shillin' Out]

hell yeah

haha awesome dude, sounds like it could replace a mario tune in one of the games (like one of the newer ones)

this is really fukin good lol

maybe more optimization? u know have more definition on certain synths, but damn lol this is cool (for something so different)

RyanChampion responds:

lol, I dont personally think that it matches up to no mario tune, but hey, thanks for listen to it dude ;)

Peace